| 2004-11-27 16:08:53 |
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hey man this tuffs cool, keep going |
| 2004-11-28 09:44:54 |
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What a cool story....can you add a aunt to the mix next time? |
| 2004-11-28 11:34:52 |
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ya its good man....waiting for the next chapter |
| 2004-11-28 17:33:38 |
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Hey YEAH has the right idea this was fucking awesome just think if that person who came to the door while they were fucking was an Aunt instead of an old friend would have made this story a great one instead of a very good one and you remembered ' voyuerism and incest a unbeatable combination.Just try that Aunt scenario next time and watch the response and don't make that same mistake so many other writer's make.Losing readers by taking too long with 2nd.chapters |
| 2005-01-29 17:15:56 |
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That was awsome man keep writing! |