| 2004-12-22 22:24:05 |
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yeh all the others have been so awsome im only up tot is one i nedd to read the rest but theyve been awsome but the mom thing wasnt as good sorry man but plz keep wirting them |
| 2004-12-23 02:45:00 |
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That is wrong. totally gross. Why would u have sex with your mother. The other stories are good but u went over the limit with this story. |
| 2004-12-24 02:36:32 |
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yeah i have to agree i do like the sister brother sex much better...and in the previous chapters marie always seemed unsexy...older and not really the point of any of the story so this was surprising...well written and a nice little twist |
| 2005-01-05 15:13:33 |
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i loved all ur stories and this one too, u seem to get alot of bad reviews on it but i loved it. the sex sounded totally hot, you did great |
| 2005-01-10 01:03:35 |
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the mom was a little over the top but, still, keep writing man |