| 2004-12-01 01:27:19 |
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revise your story giving details to the sensations etc and not just what happened ok... other than that its a 4 for lack of enthusiam(sp?) |
| 2004-12-01 12:10:32 |
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GRAMMER AND SPELLING SHIT.. try another one |
| 2004-12-01 14:01:13 |
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ok dude that was almost good i mean it hurt my eyes and my brian just tryin to figure out what you said are you dislexic or sumthin damn |
| 2004-12-02 21:48:24 |
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it was good but make grammer and spelling corections |
| 2004-12-03 15:04:46 |
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If the label on the bottle says: "Warrning this shit will make your brain and IQ shrink." then you better believe it. This story is awesome if you consider that the author only has a brain stem left. |