| 2004-08-17 20:00:44 |
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prety good, although woulda bin better if the daughter had been caughted and co-erced into joining! |
| 2004-08-31 16:30:03 |
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if nothing else, the story was well-written. a little too flirtatious, but that added to the feeling. not bad. |
| 2004-09-21 17:53:21 |
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nice story, but i didnt see any incest 7/10 |
| 2004-09-24 02:32:55 |
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Very good... Different, which made it interesting... If you were thinking of writing more, then you should... |
| 2004-11-16 10:20:54 |
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Quite nice and indeed feasible. Perhaps she should have been discovered at the window and possibly Pablo could have had a threesome. |