| 2004-12-03 04:08:19 |
Episode 2 of the Adventures of John and Holly
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very entertaining but is just so long!!! |
| 2004-12-03 06:57:17 |
Episode 2 of the Adventures of John and Holly
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gr8 story...but da stories are jss tooooo long...i cudnt complete readin da entire 1st episode even |
| 2004-12-03 13:25:07 |
Episode 2 of the Adventures of John and Holly
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Sorry if its too long for some of you, but seriously you shouldn't expect to read an episode in one sitting or even two. Episode one was 53 thousand words, 2 is just like 26 or so. If these are too long then read the parts individually. This is why they are broken up into parts. Each part gives a pretty clear break that you can stop at, and resume at the start of a next part. I think most people like how long they are, it builds the story and the character. I am wondering how well you guys will receive episode 3 |
| 2004-12-04 22:02:49 |
Episode 2 of the Adventures of John and Holly
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Way too long; how many ways are there to have sex with women? Dude it's time to learn how to write. Develope a new concept, you surely must have burnt the porn candle, by now. Go somewhere else and write about something else. |
| 2004-12-13 03:27:48 |
Episode 2 of the Adventures of John and Holly
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it is long, but john's right - just read it in small doses - otherwise it gets repetitious. Brings back memories of my lovers from college! |