| 2005-12-28 16:11:35 |
me and my sis accidently
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I'm sorry, but this story is really, really bad. The writing is horrible, the retelling is terrible, and it just over all sounds crappy. You really need to learn how to write. It sounds more like a list rather then a story. |
| 2006-01-07 18:20:44 |
me and my sis accidently
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This story was quite good but the way it was written was poor, i use this site quite a lot and you people ever do is say "yer like thats real" its porn for fuck sake! its not meant to be real, yes his story is a bit far fetched, but most porn is farfetched. GET OVER IT!! |
| 2006-06-19 18:19:24 |
me and my sis accidently
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This story was bullshit I mean BULLSHIT |
| 2006-08-01 00:09:03 |
me and my sis accidently
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hoooooooooooooooooooooooooo... |
| 2006-08-01 21:12:59 |
me and my sis accidently
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i only have 3 words for that storie, IT FUCKIN SUCKED |