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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-01-08 19:27:39 | Sweet Little Lucy - Part 2 | Okay, this is a good story, but try using the words her, or she instead of lucy, lucy, lucy. it gets old. |
| 2006-12-11 14:55:09 | Sweet Little Lucy - Part 2 | The word is spelled "Whore" not hore Untold, "YOU DUMBASS" |
| 2004-12-01 19:46:55 | Part 31: Love and Lies | Kind of horny, but you jumped from one action set to another. No 'he dreamed of another situation' or lead in to what John was thinking, while involved w/ Holly. So keep writing and learn how to make a story flow. You may contact me at above |
| 2004-12-03 07:27:54 | Part 31: Love and Lies | this is fiction right? because it sounds like "holly" is actually writing her bits. or is that just you using her character? oh yeah and great story just like the all the others. |
| 2005-04-24 00:18:20 | Part 31: Love and Lies | Is holly a real person |