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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-05-21 23:48:31 | Dream girl_(1) | I read to paragraphs and I have one word. No. |
| 2004-05-27 22:42:15 | Dream girl_(1) | I don't know where your from, But you have to have worst grammer of anyone who has finnished 3rd grade, STORY??? What story?? |
| 2004-06-04 11:37:01 | Dream girl_(1) | bad....very very bad! |
| 2004-06-05 19:25:32 | Dream girl_(1) | where did you lern to speke englund you chimp. he he he (what the fuck is that all about) don't give up the day job you fool... |
| 2004-12-17 22:40:12 | Dream girl_(1) | It's the changing from first person to third person that leads to this sort of shit failing all kinds of English papers. Keep it either 'I did this/that' throughout or 'he did...' thoughout. Don't go changing tenses... that's for the Shakepeares and u aint one of em sadly... And do you ever check ure work? |