| 2005-05-16 03:33:06 |
Hot Basketball Player Chapter 2
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Poorly written. Appalling spelling. Dreadful plot. Get a spell checker! |
| 2005-05-16 18:36:04 |
Hot Basketball Player Chapter 2
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Unrealistic, too fast, boring. |
| 2005-07-05 14:48:13 |
Hot Basketball Player Chapter 2
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Yo, you stink! I agtrr with Aya and Cprky. Besides, I couldn't even read it! I'll give this fuckin' shit story a 0/10! Shit! |
| 2004-12-10 22:50:43 |
A Chance Bi-Pick-up
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Hey, what can I say! I've been there and done that.. I don't consider myself gay but am bi.. I still enjoy romps with women as well as men... Good writing and good detail.."You say "fiction "but somehow I feel it is a true story, right! |
| 2004-12-26 11:45:47 |
A Chance Bi-Pick-up
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Perfect! glad there was no butt sex involved. great ending. good old cock sucking |