| 2004-12-10 01:36:35 |
Sex with my twin sis 2
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good story line,too short and you change the whole view point too much.read it over urself b4 putting it up.but it was really good if you make a continuation to this add alot more detail and make just a bit longer and this would be like a 8/10 storie |
| 2004-12-16 18:05:15 |
Sex with my twin sis 2
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Let me know when yo write the next one, just let me know. And it was a great story both of them. |
| 2004-12-16 19:16:10 |
Sex with my twin sis 2
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not as god as the first |
| 2005-04-02 00:49:19 |
Sex with my twin sis 2
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I wish I was your sister. |
| 2005-04-06 22:34:36 |
Sex with my twin sis 2
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Dude... I've seen better stories from 5th graders. That sucked and not in a good way. |