| 2004-04-13 01:56:11 |
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holy shit. that is so fucked up. YOUR SOME FUCKING GRAMMAR YOU IDIOT. |
| 2004-04-13 03:01:45 |
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A good shot at bedroom fantasy, needs lots of work though. AS for the rest of you who are bitching zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz,zzzzzzzzget A Life. Fantasiy is a great outlet It relieves frustration and more yet provided it is not acted on dose more good then harm . Rather a good fantasy then to see someone hold it in and then act it out. |
| 2004-04-19 09:44:48 |
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This is so soft & pathetic that I can't even get my dick up. Get some balls & write some real shit (regardless of whether the author is female or not) because it lacks the 'dominination factor'. |
| 2004-04-22 16:24:02 |
Boy's Locker Room
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No Way it Thats sucks |
| 2004-05-03 20:16:45 |
Boy's Locker Room
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i think most of you should relax. It's a story,,, and in case you haven't notice. You're on a place to read these kinds of stories. Let's see some of your work out here before you run off with your mouths. Thank you to the writer of this strory for taking the time to share with us. |