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2005-09-02 22:45:11 A new Beginning_(3) Here is the deal. I am a writer, not a mentor. I hang out with writers, some who are phenominal, some who are atrocious. You might be a writer. I am the first person to squeal about clarity, but there has to be a story there, clear or not. You have the makings of a voice. Let me tell you an important secret. Write your story in Word or some othe WP program. Walk away. Come back a few days later and read through it, don't skim, read it. Then rewrite what needs to be rewritten. Repeat as needed. Then copy and paste to this site. That way all of the formatting and spelling is done for you. Rhonda, writing is a craft not to be taken lightly, you can't learn anything without practice. Honey, you have something here, do not give up on it, keep writing. Hollar if you need help.
2005-11-23 14:52:56 A new Beginning_(3) most sucking story ever
2007-01-31 17:12:26 A new Beginning_(3) tht it was quite good
2004-12-23 17:37:36 Part 41: Session I'm so glad to see the continuation of the John and Holly episodes. They are a delight and very well done series. Don't quit writing them for a long time!
2004-12-25 07:56:48 Part 41: Session AGREED! keep them cumming!
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