| 2005-01-02 03:07:11 |
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I really enjoyed your writings. I hope you will continue with the story just to see how or what was going to happen to Bela on earth. Keep up the good work |
| 2005-01-03 19:56:53 |
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god i hope he post something soon to let us all know for sure either way. |
| 2005-01-04 12:04:51 |
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Great Story, I haven't written before as I was too busy reading. Maybe now I will get some work done. I gave both series 9/10. Just so you will strive for more! |
| 2005-01-05 22:36:43 |
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Awesome story. I came in as you were halfway posting phoenix, so I stayed up for 24 hours straight reading the Bela stories just so I could hurry and catch up with your wonderful writing. Please please please write a third book! |
| 2005-01-05 22:48:22 |
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Good story ; but you need to spend more time keeping your characters and what they say, straight. I found myself confused as to who was saying what. I gave u an 8. |