| 2005-01-02 22:02:33 |
A Little Persuasion
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i gave u a 7/10 i know u could do better but it was still ok keep it up plz |
| 2005-01-03 18:41:18 |
A Little Persuasion
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Not bad, could do better, and longer if you tried. 6/10 |
| 2005-02-13 18:30:15 |
A Little Persuasion
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Good story. Could use a little more fleshing out of the characters. |
| 2005-02-18 20:21:50 |
A Little Persuasion
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awsome story it could be a bit longer and make them suffer more |
| 2005-09-29 11:24:32 |
A Little Persuasion
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Nice story Needs to be longer more things done to the girls, more things they could have done to eachother |