| 2005-01-30 22:53:54 |
Shave me, please?
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Nasty, kinky, a little dirty and definitely sinful. You said it. Great story. |
| 2005-03-10 15:25:32 |
Shave me, please?
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That was good, very hot, and very detailled...if i could make one suggestion, it would be that you kept changing tenses (going from past to present and back again) |
| 2005-06-05 12:27:44 |
Shave me, please?
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pretty good but you could have gone into more detail with the sex. It only made me partially horny. |
| 2006-01-18 18:49:52 |
Shave me, please?
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purity dum ass u write a lot for no reason don't complain they did the best they could, 10/10 on my list, so read it and don't complain |
| 2006-05-25 02:09:38 |
Shave me, please?
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Purity you're a moron. You could abbreviate any story by just writing the title. melodramatic writing brings the reader into the story and sets a mood. "i sucked his cock to get it wet, pulled my knickers off and rode him" isn't poetic. it sounds like a little australian. what's 'knickers' anyway? |