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2004-12-29 22:26:50 Mother's Milk_(1) its a good story, honastally good. The hole passion between the mom and the sun, its a bit awakard. Mabye a "boy with a girlfriend, who was abused and inpreganated by some jerk off" and he took care of her would work better.

Not to be negitave, but the ending sucked. And when you wrote "come and came" it should be turned into cum. Like in the end,

Jack's cock was throbbing so badly he was afraid he was going to come in pants just standing there. He went to her bed!

Jack's cock was thobbing so badly he was afraid he was going to 'cum' in his pants, just standing their.

The hole ending sucked, Just to let you know.

Over all great story, i hope to hear more.

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2004-12-29 22:27:23 Mother's Milk_(1) So grose! You wouldnt fuck your mom. that is the worst story ever and even if it would be somewhat good, its way too long! Try again because this one sucked!
2004-12-30 00:00:17 Mother's Milk_(1) I would do the same thing myself if I was a young fella my but i never had a chance to.
2004-12-30 01:31:48 Mother's Milk_(1) I think you write well. It was truly arousing. Don't know what else to say!
2004-12-30 09:37:12 Mother's Milk_(1) Great story. Made me hot and hard and cum a gusher. Do a follow-on in which mom returns the favor and sucks and drinks jack's "milk"
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