| 2005-07-14 17:32:23 |
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Bravo! good story. anybody who complains is truely stupid. it was well written it had everything a good story needs. hell it had everything a good book needs. a plot a villain (a hero isnt really needed for this design) a tradgedy that forms a life(if you want to look at it that way) and im gonna agreee with Sexy Amazon on one point and then go against her a second later. William you make toadshit look like a prodigal genious. but Sexy please listen to me. this story isnt saying that this is a womans place. the father is using that for the brainwashing. saying that it is her place. saying she has no choice when in some part of it she does. just relax. the story is humiliation and domination. thats just saying what the basis of the story is out loud. no biggy. way to go Hawthorne. you rock |
| 2005-08-17 15:18:30 |
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i'm writin this comment and i'm still shivering 9/10 |
| 2005-09-17 00:31:48 |
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this was an awesome story, a totally brillant job! |
| 2005-09-28 11:48:16 |
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that was awsome the fantasies hurry with the next one |
| 2005-10-25 01:57:27 |
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You guys liked this stupid domination shit! It's nasty and thats all it is, damn I can't belive people actually get off to this shit. I thought I was a perve but you guys are on a whole other level. |