2005-01-06 00:21:02 |
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Too many genre's mixed into one story (incest & bestiality). I give you a 2. |
2005-01-06 00:44:54 |
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it was ok, please work on the grammar!! Things like " " would be VERY useful. I gave you a 10 because of the good detail. |
2005-01-06 18:54:42 |
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horny2947 has some interesting comments. great story lets have some more. |
2005-01-07 07:24:22 |
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A)Perv, you are a cock sucker. B)This story is missing a lot of punctuation. C)This story is boring. D)why the hell did you write this story and why did you every thought of the genre bestially. Incest 10/10 but the bestially made it a 3/10. Sorry. :( |
2005-01-08 03:35:11 |
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That was a fucking great storie :D |