| 2005-01-21 08:42:41 |
A Night of Dancing_(1)
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Very good writing. Sensual; especially the section when the man goes down on the woman. Exquisite writing on that part. |
| 2005-03-29 16:34:02 |
A Night of Dancing_(1)
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this is your first try? keep it up. a dictionary nearby would make it almost perfect |
| 2004-12-28 18:50:08 |
Sex with my twin sis and more
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The story was quite good, although could do with some more work!!! but over all good! |
| 2004-12-29 12:35:43 |
Sex with my twin sis and more
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sucked |
| 2005-01-02 20:59:20 |
Sex with my twin sis and more
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Could be better..didn't like Frank..being an ass. You should've been like, dude, only I get to fuck my sister! Anyway, waiting for part 4! |