| 2005-07-20 05:13:27 |
Cheesy Gordita
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For it being about kids, it's not bad but your heart not really in it like the others. I think you like writting rape fantasy more than this shit! |
| 2005-01-12 03:35:58 |
The Chamber Ch. 3
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this story is really good. i for one actually enjoyed it and would like to read more of your stuff. both my wife and i got off to this story. thanks for some ideas |
| 2005-01-14 13:06:07 |
The Chamber Ch. 3
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gfhh |
| 2007-05-03 02:41:59 |
The Chamber Ch. 3
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the build up was worth it great |
| 2004-12-30 02:07:22 |
Fantasy Fulfilled_(4)
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one hell of a good story i loved it .wish it was me doing that to her |