| 2005-02-12 20:13:34 |
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love to piss on a slut as she drinks my pee. |
| 2005-02-28 12:26:02 |
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Great story. Pissing part fantastic, but u went a little overboard with the shitting part. good work though. 9/10 |
| 2005-03-03 13:55:35 |
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that was brilliant!!!! give me a slut like that anytime |
| 2005-03-26 00:07:05 |
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So this girl is dying of typhoid now right? Because in all probability she should be. Shit is 100% poison you know. |
| 2005-03-26 10:16:53 |
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I agree with Devilsadvocate, you made the story sound like it was a man in his forties, during a mid-life crisis! You used words that make you sound less then, all though your plot was good but it all ways comes back to incest and imature words like "boobies". |