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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-01-18 17:25:42 | ABC's of Puberty | Excellent story, i gave U a 10. You need a spell checker, and to write more stories. Very good work. R |
| 2005-01-18 17:47:37 | ABC's of Puberty | Seriously dude I actually thawt the story a bit rushed. you have to make the storyline a bit longer. EVEN IF IT SPOSED TO BE A TRUE STORY YOU SHOULD EMBELLISH A LITTLE BIT TO GET THE READERS MORE INTERESTED. |
| 2005-01-18 18:41:08 | ABC's of Puberty | lol nice but seriously it was too short during the sex. i think u need more adjectives |
| 2005-01-18 20:38:52 | ABC's of Puberty | As an author myeslf, I suggest actually writing the story in like microsoft word first, as it will auto correct. When your finished writing it, running spell check helps to correcting spelling etc. Then copy/paste into the post section rather than try to write the story in the post box. Not a bad story...elaborate a bit more on the sex part |
| 2005-01-19 07:26:35 | ABC's of Puberty | Wazzup, IT ROCKED, TYPE IT IN MICROSOFT WORD FIRST, WORKS GREAT |