| 2005-09-23 15:41:44 |
Episode 4 of the Adventures of John and Holly
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This has got to be the best stories I have ever read. It only took me three days to read 1 - 49, I couldn't stop. I really got into these characters. Most of the stories on here are all sex, and while all of these had alot of sex, there was a more personal side. I feel like I know John and Holly. While I understand a writer can get burnt out, I really hope you continue. If you chose not to, my hat is off to you. Wonderful writing. |
| 2005-01-22 01:57:51 |
Caring for Tommy
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If it was longer it would have been asome but it was a very good plot . |
| 2005-01-22 02:02:04 |
Caring for Tommy
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though it was a good story, i think there were some definite grammar errors that should have been fixed, also a poor ending, a 6/10 |
| 2005-01-22 09:54:20 |
Caring for Tommy
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Good story, but it seems like the ending was cut of. There should definetly be a part two |
| 2005-01-22 14:06:05 |
Caring for Tommy
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if anybody knows my comments they know that this is what i've been asking for minus an Aunt but this story would have been so much better if you would have described the boy's cock as huge at least around 10 inches or monsterous |