| 2005-03-19 08:49:03 |
Collect! - A paper Boy's Dream
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Great story, well written had a mental image of the story, Good job man. |
| 2005-03-21 09:07:53 |
Collect! - A paper Boy's Dream
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wonderful and exciting story. I rate 9/10 |
| 2005-03-25 20:25:15 |
Collect! - A paper Boy's Dream
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it was a good story i was very turned on while reading this story. keep writing:) |
| 2005-04-04 10:35:16 |
Collect! - A paper Boy's Dream
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very good story! |
| 2005-04-11 08:14:59 |
Collect! - A paper Boy's Dream
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Holy shit that is a 10/10 man. that is the best story that i have read. this has it all: description, punctuation and spelling corrrections. People take the athour's lead and make great stories like this. But sadly people usually have shitty stories with spelling mistkes (note: for some of you who pointed out that was a mistake well done but that was an example) and punctuation mistakes. but ov erall a story worth reading. someone give this person $2 million AUD. |