| 2005-01-23 01:20:50 |
Riverbank
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I liked it. I wonder what she'll do to "horseboy" at the next encounter. Tantalizing! An 8. |
| 2005-01-28 16:19:29 |
Riverbank
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Perhaps the best use of punctuation on the site. The dialog needs work, as it doesn't flow with the descriptive measures. |
| 2005-11-15 23:17:26 |
Riverbank
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Most enjoyable. Good English and Punctuation. What a change from some of the crap we read. Well done. |
| 2005-12-28 12:42:54 |
Riverbank
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great |
| 2005-01-22 06:23:24 |
The Language Barrier
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Oh i like this story! Write more please...when shes in his house! |