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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-05-05 04:18:30 | Lucy - Interacial Slut | titman, this is the first time i've seen your comment not turn into an entire new story, lmao. just fuckin with ya bro. i dig reading your comments, they're good suggestions. |
| 2005-07-15 15:19:07 | Lucy - Interacial Slut | kick ass story i loved it write more man ur a great writer |
| 2005-01-27 16:46:14 | The Most Beautiful Creature | You know, I can't get into this story... develop the plot more. You have a good idea, but it plays out too fast. Take some time. I am sure that your character wouldn't jus sit there and say "fuck my pussy dry" to a guy she doesn't even know. I think that it would be an interesting story if you went back to it later and developed it more. |
| 2005-01-28 01:49:19 | The Most Beautiful Creature | this sounds awfully similiar to another story on the web site, "her little pet". it jumped too quick to the action and should have set the mood or tone to allow more build-up. |
| 2005-02-28 23:00:09 | The Most Beautiful Creature | This could be very good. Just hash it out some more. |