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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-01-27 16:55:35 | The Devil did it! | This reads like a screen play more than a story. Perhaps you could take it into more of a story form and fix the formatting to a more internet friendly version. It's difficult to read. |
| 2005-01-30 14:31:37 | The Devil did it! | This is the most imaginative and most interesting story I've read here. The small details (such as the photo transforming) make it so much richer than most of the stories here. It would be easier to read if the narration and the dialogue-character-labels were set off by italics or a different font. Proof-reading would improve it as well. |
| 2005-01-23 13:18:22 | Parlour punishment | Not eough but good story. |
| 2005-01-24 07:01:47 | Parlour punishment | Great story. I have the same fantasies. Bit short, but well-written. |
| 2005-01-24 12:57:14 | Parlour punishment | excellent descriptions it almost felt like i was there..... (i dont mean this in some weird messed up sexual way) |