| 2005-08-12 13:22:16 |
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Gorgeous Story....dude, u're writing excellent |
| 2005-08-24 23:25:41 |
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nice story, good writing and a great plot. keep it up |
| 2005-09-10 13:11:08 |
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Great story, hope to see more like this in the future. |
| 2005-10-04 23:53:51 |
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i loved your story please continue to write on pedey, and susan. |
| 2005-10-24 06:48:06 |
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Great story. Keep it up! (no pun intended) 8/10 |