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2006-12-16 08:42:05 IN MY FRIEND'S HOUSE WITH MY WIFE When I fucked my friend's wife in her bedroom, I could feel her pussy muscles squeezing my erupting shaft as I pressed my erected cock hard against her cunt and ejaculated my sticky load deep inside her tight vagina.
2007-07-05 08:22:39 IN MY FRIEND'S HOUSE WITH MY WIFE good work, keep it up!
2005-01-27 16:53:02 The Chair_(3) The formatting of your story makes it very difficult to read. Develop the plot a bit more. This is a very interesting idea, but the story is choppy.

Let me know if you update this. I am interested in reading the details.
2005-02-02 19:45:29 The Chair_(3) not sure why everyone thinks its so bad. A little weird sure, but no less weird than most of the incest shit here people seem to like.

not really sure why darkgoddess thinks its choppy, it is just following the chair through time, pretty obvious. the dude that first owned it is probably no different than child slave runners that could be found today, although repulsive, it is just a story.

i would say that your writing is pretty good compared to a lot, and it is probably the topic people don't like. I myself prefer "normal" heterosexual-even kinky-sex but most of the stuff here is over the top.

You could probably tone down the sex and write some occult stuff. Or write something without the chair that more focussed on sex and get people liking it more
2005-02-09 16:39:18 The Chair_(3) crap
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