| 2008-05-02 11:56:47 |
Kumiko - Part 1: Snowed In_(1)
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34E breats on a japanese girl....inherited from her mother? suuuure |
| 2008-05-06 02:42:56 |
The Awakening of Katie
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That was fantastic! It had a little bit of everything in regards to the sexual genres, the storyline was engaging, you developed the charactars quite well, never slipped into different objectives (1st , 2nd and 3rd person) unwittingly and managed to keep more entertained for the WHOLE story; not just some of it. I give it a 9/10. The only constructive critiscism I can give (and mine is actually constructive) would be to proof read your work before posting. Very well done! |
| 2008-05-09 08:10:26 |
The Principal's Wife Is Schooled By Some Students Part 1
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what the hell?! biggest anticlimax ever! |
| 2008-05-17 12:46:11 |
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disappointingly short sex scene. good to see a fellow brisbanite here tho =D |