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Comments from Archivest
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2018-05-29 04:09:25 | A Quiet Piss_(1) | As much as I love the subject matter, having blind monsters hunt their victims by sound would require acute hearing. Even if Adi swallowed Sam's piss, the act of swallowing would already make some noise in and of itself. Plus, if I were the blind monsters, I'd find ways of distinguishing lights first of all, so the electricity would have been the first to go. That all said though, I did enjoy the story, and hope to see future chapters -- either from Adi's perspective or with Sam returning the favor. Him thinking purely with his dick at the end of the chapter would probably mean that he'd be returning the favor to make some room for future piss. Having Adi's perspective instead though would be more interesting, as the reader has to wonder how she (1) came up with the idea so quickly, and (2) where she got the practice, as I doubt the piss was watered down any. Hope to see future postings in this series, and thanks for sharing to the masses. Stay well, Archivest |
| 2018-07-28 07:00:26 | Collared by Bruno Chapter 1 | Process globally? Oh boy, that means it's working on her, and since the global influence is limited to just touching the collar, it may work on others in the future -- whether canid or humanoid. I really enjoyed the chapter, though I hope that she'll one day become willing without the collar's influence. Or maybe removing the collar's embedded instructions is impossible after the fact -- who knows. This certainly has one making sure to read the manual a little more thoroughly before using a product... By the way, what on earth is deion? I really enjoyed the scene where she tinkled outside -- wonder if he'll be marking his territory some time later? I'll be keeping an eye on this series for sure, and will review the second chapter now. |
| 2018-08-01 08:57:08 | Collared by Bruno Chapter 2 | In the story it says: "In females, stimulates submissiveness for breeding." I assume that because she checked the global box, she was able to uncheck the aggressive options under the breeding category, as those instructions would then only effect her and not Bruno? I wonder what's in store for her next? After all, she did check the box to not prompt her when continuing the training routine, so I'm sure there's a bit left to go before it's complete. It's amazing that she woke up unmolested when she put on the collar, though... Stay well and thanks for sharing to the masses, Archivest |
| 2018-09-17 04:12:21 | Meeting the Pack | It's a little sparse in detail compared to, say, "Jessica's Shower", but I like where it's going so far. Note that this is the second story I've read from you, but I enjoyed the introduction for what it is -- setting up the scene and building the world for hopefully future parts. I assume that these wolf-men don't have knots, simply because they are in their in-between states, and this will change if they fully take on their bestial transformation? I wouldn't mind more dialogue - whether dirty talk or otherwise -- as well as fleshing out the details of each boy as she personally and intimately gets to know them better. It's a good start, and I hope to see more installments in the near future. |
| 2018-10-18 05:56:50 | Strays Bitch 01 | Loved how though this is basically still porn without plot, you made Julia's progression from looking at porn to acts of bestiality as natural as can be. While I love the fact that she had a routine down to choose a canine companion and methods of enticing them, but I suppose if this story continues, this will no longer be necessary due to her caging by this unknown cultured woman? Then again, maybe she'll be let free in the morning, though with those wonderful wolf-like hounds scratching her itch, she may not want to leave. I hope whatever happens, that she gets to explore her love to doggy sex in varying scenarios, from almost getting caught, to full out orgies. I really enjoyed the characterization of both the two-legged as well as the four-legged. Keep up the great work and I do look forward to a part 2. Thanks for sharing to the masses and stay well, Archivest |