| 2008-10-26 18:49:48 |
Shower Surprize
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If you are a female, you hide it well. You do not tell a good story and you definitely cannot handle first person. |
| 2008-10-26 18:54:55 |
Secret Fantasy - Part 1
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I thought it was a great beginning. |
| 2008-10-26 19:23:46 |
Nubile Bliss 3
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Very enjoyable. You really should continue the tale. |
| 2008-10-27 22:31:02 |
To save her daddy's life -part 2
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I also write and enjoyed your story very much |
| 2008-10-29 17:24:01 |
Toms frustration
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When a story is not broken down into smaller paragraphs it is very hard reading. |