| 2011-05-18 19:26:06 |
The "RED' hot lady next door
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Hell Yeah he is good!... |
| 2011-05-19 20:39:31 |
An IN/Sight Exclusive Report: -- Island Royale: Institutional White Slavery in the New Millennium
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Hi...i am the one who posted the first comment and i think you can be a great author...what you should have however done was....post the first story and then wait for it to sink it and THEN post another story but YOU HAVE TALENT |
| 2011-05-21 11:52:07 |
TEASING WARS
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It was very nice story! |
| 2011-05-22 12:27:43 |
My 25 year old boyfriend
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It was a good start...just try to fix your paragraphs and make the story longer...good ideas. 7/10 and a + |
| 2011-05-24 16:03:19 |
Jake's Adventures: Part I_(1)
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THIS WAS A GOOD STORY! i loved it 8/10 |