| 2011-05-28 20:45:16 |
Hacking into my Aunts Computer
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I agree with Rider...I give you a 9/10 and ofcourse a positive...your spelling is fine with me... |
| 2011-06-05 15:54:40 |
Just another person to beat
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Nicely done...small mistake...but nicely done! |
| 2011-06-05 15:59:39 |
The day my little sister became a slut.
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Lol...nice story...I enjoyed it! |
| 2011-06-06 20:43:21 |
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I am sorry for giving you contructive criticism...and in return I get a neg vote for something I worked very hard on...bravo... |
| 2011-06-07 17:43:09 |
Fucking our Sisters!!
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Thanks a lot for the positive vote and helpful comments...and for the neg and stupid comments...you can lick my asshole! I might have made a small mistakes but if you think you can do a better job PLEASE write a story and post it here.... |