| 2011-03-26 19:02:42 |
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Sorry for posting 5 and 6 twice. The submission form turned all my " into ? so I submitted a corrected version for easier reading while I wait for the originals to be yanked. |
| 2011-03-26 19:03:10 |
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Sorry for posting 5 and 6 twice. The submission form turned all my " into ? so I submitted a corrected version for easier reading while I wait for the originals to be yanked. |
| 2011-03-26 19:26:35 |
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what do you suggest? I don't mind criticism but it does me no good if you don't elaborate so I know how to improve it. |
| 2011-03-27 12:24:19 |
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To the Reader below, I thank you for your input. But I must say, considering I never gave a specific time period or even stated this took place on earth; the fact the cities and countries are fictional; and the fact that I place this squarely in the fantasy section would, I think, be enough to excuse "historical inaccuracies" considering I never stated it was any part of Earth's History. |
| 2011-03-28 13:48:59 |
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lol! It's coming! just have to proof it. |