| 2011-04-07 20:37:12 |
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To Anonymous below: Thanks for the comments. I hadn't given it much thought but it makes sense. Glad you're enjoying the series despite the physiological discrepancies :) And yes, I know I prolonged the sex a little more than most are used to on here. But I wanted the wedding night to be one giant "release" so to speak. I think building up her virginity for so long really helped make that scene a doozie. She went from virtually untouched to a cumloving slut in no time flat. And I don't think it would have been so profound without all the teasing earlier. But I do get a little long winded sometimes. One reason it takes me so long to get chapters posted. I'm constantly asking myself if I've stretched a scene out too long. lol |
| 2011-04-29 08:09:39 |
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More is coming. I apologize for the delay. Hubby graduates basic training next week and I'm buried under travel plans and packing. lol. I do hope to post the next chapter before I leave town. Hopefully time will permit that! Thanks to everyone for reading and leaving comments! Always a thrill to hear what people think! |
| 2011-05-14 08:50:05 |
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I hope to have it up today or tomorrow... As I said, I'm very sorry. I had a trip planned to see hubby graduate basic training after 2.5 months of not seeing him... it distracted me a little from worrying about writing porno. lol |
| 2011-05-15 08:04:35 |
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Yeah. Sorry for that. It's one reason this chapter took so long to get posted. Hubby is off with the army and I'm getting NO SEX. I was hoping our day together at graduation would end in that "first time" feeling after going without it so long but things didn't work out to our advantage and we didn't get a chance :(. I tried to hold off on posting this chapter till I had a chance to revitalize my body but people were getting impatient. Oh well, plenty more sex scenes coming. Hopefully one will meet your approval. |
| 2011-06-22 22:10:13 |
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Well guys, I'm torn to be honest. This chapter received such disappointed reviews I wanted to be sure the next made up for that fact but as I've stated before, my life is hectic right now with all these army things going on. I'm moving halfway across the country in less than a month and we don't even have a place to move into yet.
I'm sorry if the waiting is too difficult. But I'd rather post something good than just post because people are impatient. Just look what happened with this chapter. I posted it before I really felt like it was ready due to the pressure to just put something out there and most didn't care for it.
So I'll be holding the next chapter till I feel like it's good enough to post. And right now, I don't have the time to devote to making a great chapter. |