2005-03-17 12:56:45 |
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Good for your first story Katie. I enjoyed it. Made me horny too. |
2005-03-20 06:06:14 |
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Esoteric is right, but I see the potential.i say 7/10, after giving it a 10/10 :-) i want to see sequal |
2005-04-04 12:15:29 |
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what the hell? come on you can write better than this. 5/10 |
2005-04-10 07:16:47 |
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OK...what about describing in painful detail the humiliation she felt sticking her mouth her dog's legs and sucking his dick until he spurted his sticky dog cum in her mouth. Her skin must have crawled with embarassment when she realized she had sucked a dog's dick...LOL! How about the shame from fucking her brother just to keep him quiet? How about some of her perverse fantasies about being whipped in front of a group of horny boys or made to suck off the swimming team? |
2005-04-20 13:58:24 |
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it is very good but need more of it , yes make a sequel or several |