| 2005-04-25 04:47:24 |
Doing It Doggy Style!!
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Great story Katie keep writting don't worry about those who give you negitive reply's |
| 2005-05-10 09:53:30 |
Doing It Doggy Style!!
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Good story, write more |
| 2005-05-14 03:07:17 |
Doing It Doggy Style!!
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good, but cut back on the noises. |
| 2005-05-17 05:13:52 |
Doing It Doggy Style!!
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it was good and all.. but you know.. when u lose ur virginity no matter how small the guys dick is.. unless its a kid. it will hurt.. so when you lose ur virginity and realize this then you may write another. until then i suggest you think about this one and improving it. just for your own self satisfaction. and like said before.. not as many sounds. keep it to the feelings that they are having inside more then moaning every few seconds outside. but it was a good story in terms of story line/plot. |
| 2005-05-22 21:17:18 |
Doing It Doggy Style!!
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yo man u made me masterbed make a video out of it ask ur brro to help u to make a video |