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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-02-01 23:17:37 | William | WOW! that was fucking amazing... you guys should keep in writing stories together u know... fabolous.. i lovec it... 10/10 |
| 2005-02-02 14:29:02 | William | god where did my viborater go... 9/10 |
| 2005-02-02 15:44:45 | William | A rubbish story. Time line is weird. For example, "William’s cock sensed every ripple inside her pussy, it was like walking in heaven, and he was in a dream world of his own. He was glad that he’d got Ellie back; after all she did take his virginity." When did Ellie come back? Also, get the SPELLING AND GRAMMER right!!! so many stories are ruined because of this. |
| 2005-02-02 17:56:45 | William | I love this story it turns me on!!!!write more about this kinda shit!! |
| 2005-02-02 22:18:58 | William | A few spelling errors and some awkward sentences, but all in all it was a great story 8/10 |