| 2005-07-17 00:01:22 |
WILLOW HALL
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Well, I've seen worse, but that doesn't change the fact that this is pretty crappy. The intro says it's "for the girls", but I doubt the ladies are too thrilled either. |
| 2005-09-17 09:07:19 |
WILLOW HALL
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I love you. 8/10 I'd like to see the rest of Tuckers Island. |
| 2005-12-19 13:47:01 |
WILLOW HALL
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Really good. Could have been longer, and with scope for sequels. Are there any planned? Some of these stories of yours are not designed to automatically cause an orgasm, but they set the mood nicely. 10/10 |
| 2005-02-03 05:38:34 |
Young Cindy
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I thought that this was a pretty good story, for all that it was incredibly long. Use smaller spaces between the paragraphs, for heaven's sake. And there are three kinds of "to". Two, to, and too, (which is the one that you should have used more often). The biggest problem I had with this story, was trying to understand the vernacular of British suburbanites, That dialect is bloody well difficult to fathom. I'm glad that I read the child's collection of Paddington Bear stories, or I would have been well and truly lost. |
| 2005-02-03 09:49:05 |
Young Cindy
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you're one of the best but i just wished that when Judy saw her sister come out of the room she noticed some white stuff on her cheek and for a brief moment thought it might be cum''but whose and good description of a cock'' needed an Aunt thrown into the mix though |