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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-02-14 23:24:48 | My Last Trip | It might have been a good storyexcept for the poor spelling. Just when you start to get into the story up pops a misspelled word and it breaks your train of thought. Get a dictionary next time you write a story. |
| 2005-02-15 06:26:45 | My Last Trip | for Cumbucket....A man goes to the Doctor and says, Doctor, it hurts when I do that! The Doctor says, don't do that! If you and others are bothered by spelling errors, stop reading the Damn artical! |
| 2005-02-15 22:09:39 | My Last Trip | very sick storiy couldn't read all of it |
| 2005-02-16 23:32:49 | My Last Trip | آمو اين بچه خيلي... لاشي... بوده... هركي... مواف... بنوي... 1 |
| 2005-02-21 14:48:50 | My Last Trip | I agree with 'cumbucket'. Also the story starts out with a woman's viewpoint, and then moves directly to the man's view with no break or explanation. Get a spell checker, your spelling really fucked up your story. i didn't rate it; it was that bad. |