| 2005-02-20 13:20:45 |
My First Time and My last time
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i dont believe that 20 minutes stuff. beat your first time was like 20 seconds |
| 2005-02-25 01:13:04 |
My First Time and My last time
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what the fuck 20 mins? That shit is retarded like this story. Fuck y'all |
| 2005-02-25 21:35:11 |
My First Time and My last time
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Your spelling sucks so bad, I couldn't follow the story, plus your action is too fast, no punctuation, or not in the correct place. I didn't rate this story. |
| 2005-07-14 00:12:24 |
My First Time and My last time
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OMG so gay wow i fuckder then she died! at a stor! wow you made it sond sooo horubol! but its an Ok start(i think) |
| 2007-01-26 12:57:03 |
My First Time and My last time
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bullshit |