| 2008-02-13 17:28:33 |
My First Time and My last time
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dude learn how to spell n use punctation i kept losin myselfwhen reading it |
| 2005-02-19 12:48:16 |
Good ghost,bad ghost!
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you know you have spell check right? the story started out okay but you skipped around to much it was hard to follow |
| 2005-02-20 20:35:47 |
Good ghost,bad ghost!
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Learn To Spell Bitch! |
| 2005-02-23 17:07:31 |
Good ghost,bad ghost!
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GOOD BUT U CANT SPELL WORTH SHIT! |
| 2005-02-24 13:10:46 |
Good ghost,bad ghost!
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Wow...uh... learn how to spell... Also, there really wasn't much sex, so idk if it could be considered a sex story... but really...learn how to spell,or at least proof read. |