| 2005-02-28 20:34:20 |
~Papas
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that was dumb |
| 2005-02-28 21:44:32 |
~Papas
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I don't mind critique people. But if you just want to be an ass. Do it somewhere else!! Thank you... |
| 2005-02-28 22:54:57 |
~Papas
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Very erotic. Grammar may need work, but it got me wet. Job accomplished. Keep writing! |
| 2005-03-15 16:07:15 |
~Papas
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that was a very hot and horny story. but you need to finish writing the rest so i can find out the end of it . please don't leave me hanging on like this. |
| 2005-03-15 18:37:44 |
~Papas
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GREAT STORY..really hot, please write part 2 soon. i watched my friend do his daughter like that one night, i was keeping his wife busy. |