| 2005-07-06 20:16:13 |
~Papas
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Hey katman and whatever, the two of you chose to read this story. so apprently the idea of it turned you on, why else read it? so please go try to make someone else feel like shit, because i could care less what hypocrites think. its fiction people get over it, don't read it if you dont want to!!!!!! |
| 2005-07-10 05:16:43 |
~Papas
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it iss the best ever write more |
| 2005-07-19 14:38:30 |
~Papas
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not bad papa went just far enough to be believable as still het me horny. 9/10 |
| 2005-07-20 23:32:17 |
~Papas
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This story is so poorly writen! I didn't get past the 10th sentence before I had to stop reading this. Maybe next time you should think about making the sentences longer and not so choppy. Try again! |
| 2005-08-05 00:18:30 |
~Papas
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I think that this story was ok. I think that you should write a little better but I think this was your first story but its ok. |