| 2005-03-09 18:26:22 |
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Damn you can write. :) Great story loved every part. Cant wait for part2 |
| 2005-03-10 03:37:34 |
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My god, how can a story like this get a 7? Is everybody in here 13 years old? Don't publish a story until you rewrite it at least 5 times. Work on your punctuation. Get the thought firmly visualized in your mind before you put it on paper. You can do better. |
| 2005-03-10 12:09:56 |
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omg u have got to make a part two like so fast this was brilliant!!! |
| 2005-03-10 16:52:00 |
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yes 8 |
| 2005-03-11 15:10:59 |
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thought it was excellent keep writting. cant wait for part 2 |