| 2005-03-12 15:15:19 |
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I liked the ending alot, but you should have made it longer!cant wait 4 part 2 |
| 2005-03-13 20:48:22 |
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Damn... 10/10... but you gotta make a Part 2 MAN!!! |
| 2005-03-14 14:25:41 |
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I like. When I was 13 all I could do was dream and hope. What's the brother's name???? Or who is it that walked in??? |
| 2005-03-15 08:45:22 |
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nice story dying for part two maybe you could include some feet licking and smelling too |
| 2005-03-15 08:46:08 |
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keep it goin get part 2 out |