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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-03-08 17:25:45 | Oh mom I love you | Its cool because its not my mom.butt ur moms sounds preety fine |
| 2005-03-09 00:22:46 | Oh mom I love you | it started nicely but the middle sucked since it wasnt gradual the hole seducing thing so put some more stuf in the middle make the seducing last longer it be much better but it was a good story |
| 2005-03-09 03:36:59 | Oh mom I love you | This was a good story and I really got a good hardon while reading it. As I got farther into the story, I realized that this is where I have to Jack-Off. It was a good load and I really enjoyed it. Write some more about your friend , and make this a threesome I gave it a 9-10 |
| 2005-03-10 09:55:09 | Oh mom I love you | you sick fuck! How can u be fucking ur Mum. And no, not all of us have thoughts about fucking our Mums. If this is a story, then dodgy, if not, seriously twisted...start finding a REAL woman, and leave your Mum to have her OWN sexual partners... This is why incest is taboo; because it is amoral! Please honestly, get a (sexual) life |
| 2005-03-10 15:21:58 | Oh mom I love you | Thou? Thou is not used here, you mean though. Thou is for "Thou shall not kill." Your punctuation looks like you shot it from a gun and it just hit everywhere. Your story? What story? You have a few thoughts, but you didn't make them into a cohesive story. Read a bit, then you will know how to form a story. |