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Comments from READER
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2005-03-13 22:34:04 | Oh mom I love you | Learn to write grammatically correct. Its a pain to read a story without quotation marks. |
2005-03-13 23:19:24 | Oh mom I love you | nice story.... should have sxplained your moms body more though |
2005-03-14 23:59:41 | Oh mom I love you | You may want to proof read a bit. You had a lot of scattered ideas, good ones, but scattered. If you were to combine them together and go over it some, I'm sure it would get much higher ratings. Don't listen to these guys, they're just asshats. You should be free to do whatever you want to do. |
2005-03-16 20:07:47 | Oh mom I love you | Appreciate all the writing tips, will try and do better....Thanks for all the good and bad comments ..And thanks for the great ratings Rusty rusty |
2005-03-17 10:28:34 | Oh mom I love you | hey i like to read something auf deutsch or in german...whats going on in the usa? sun is shining in germany:o) |