2005-03-11 12:38:03 |
Brother and Sister_(3)
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Jeez, dude, you don't win points for brevity around here. Sketch in a little background and description next time. |
2005-03-11 21:49:23 |
Brother and Sister_(3)
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hey i liked your story it was short but i like just the quicky stories. keep writing |
2005-03-11 22:23:22 |
Brother and Sister_(3)
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it was ok it could have been longer |
2005-03-12 13:56:34 |
Brother and Sister_(3)
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great start but could have used more voyuerism '' maybe have sis tell someone she watched her brother jacking off the biggest fucking cock she's ever seen and whoever it is wants to watch with her'' maybe a little girlfriend or even her Aunt |
2005-03-13 00:51:27 |
Brother and Sister_(3)
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good story. little short. try to langthen next time. but at least you finished it unlike some others. |